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Tuesday 12 September 2017

Free View

 LI: to write about feelings.
Today for inquiry I made a poem. The Poem I made is a Free View Poem. In my poem I have over six syllables! I also finished my work on time and was surprised I created a good poem while rushing...
Anyway I had Fun making poems on feelings. My poem was actually based on something that happen to me once. My poem feeling is Horifyed.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Fui

    Sorry I didn't correct you earlier. This is a "free verse" poem. You did very well coming up with this poem by yourself. I know you were trying to make a haiku with limited syllables, but I think this poem is better than what you might have ended up with.

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