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Thursday 22 August 2019

Persuasive speech


In every corner of the world animal cruelty can take many different turns but the effect is always the same. A living animal capable of love and creating relationships experiences pain, fear, most sadly desperation and this needs to stop! Hi, Im Fui and it’s important that I speak for our helpless animals who suffer everyday and dont have a voice for themselves.

In 1793 circuses desired more attention so they collected a variety of different animals for what we call “entertainment”, but there's more to it than that! Have you ever wondered how the bear can balance on the rope? How tiger has no fear to jump through fire? You think its entertainment but all I see is suffering animals that can't live their happy wild life! Why should they lose their happiness, families and most importantly t
heir freedom.

Can't you see the pain in the tiger's eyes knowing he or she could get burnt or even die right then and there, or hear the bear cubs cries for help as the thin rope slitz against his wounded and bruised paws? And this is all for what? Entertainment? Is that really the only reason why these poor animals have to suffer? We have seen their pain, we have heard the cries, we have had our attempts on changing things but will that ever be enough to stop the suffer of our innocent animals?

Did you know that if you were to be caught harming any type of animal you are most likely to be put in jail for 2 years or in most cases 5. If your lucky you are given the chance to bail out earlier by paying the fee of 5,000 dollars. In my opinion all animal abusers should be put in jail for 10 years because that's a living creatures life your ruining let alone their health.

Animals who have been abused can be traumatised for the rest of their lives after they've been either taken care of or rescued. They become afraid to eat with people close by. Sometimes if they feel threatened, they usually bite or growl. Sadly most animals are put down because they will never be able to live a normal life. This shouldn’t be happening because no living thing should have to go through being put down because of behavioural health issues caused by their disgusting abusive owner.

In conclusion animal cruelty is never the answer and will never be the answer to discipline! All in all animal abuse happens every

In conclusion animal cruelty is never the answer and will never be the answer to discipline! All in all animal abuse happens every minute every hour and it needs to stop now! Thank you for listening, I hope you have enjoyed my speech on animal abuse :)

This week we had the fun opportunity to participate in a school speech competition. Each class had the chance to complete their persuasive speech on whatever topic they wanted it to be. In the first week of presenting our speeches in able to win we had to use expression, eye contact, confidence, hooking in the reader and persuasive language features. For our first speech off I started very well but as I stumbled on some words I stopped becoming confident. Thankfully enough we all had the chance to improve by saying our speech again on Monday. I improved on my confidence, Expression and also a lot of eye contact. After morning tea our teachers revealed the winners. Even though I did not make it I was happy to see my sisters place 1st and 3rd. Our winners for yr 7 and 8 was Mele, Jack and Marieta I enjoyed watching their speech because they used a lot of eye contact as well as expression. Here is my speech about animal cruelty and how it is never the way to discipline :)

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