Narrative intro

              Fight night at the Dragon cave

Bang! , chop , ‘Another fight lesson has been done”shouted Blake.

Jack saw the look on Blake's face and new something was up.

‘Our fight is going to be epic!” Jill screeched. ‘What fight?” Jack asked.

LI:To plan a narrative

Today I learnt how to create a interesting hook. I learnt by taking the boring sentence out  and making it into a non boring sentence.