The Ghost
3 Years ago a man of magic came to the light in heaven. He was Known as Mr Peek. A family decided to go to the house that Mr peek used to live in after he died , But they didn't know that Mr peek was living with a bad spirit called Mahayana . Once the family moved in they heard whispers saying ‘DO Not Come IN!”,From Mr peek. He tried to warn The family but they didn't listen.
3 minutes later They heard ‘If you want to join me kill yourself” from Mahayana the bad spirit . The family ignored it.then they noticed that the baby was gone.they looked everywhere but not in the basement.then they heard the baby cry. They ran down into the basement they went in one by one Mr peek said once more time ‘Leave know, Mahayana you have done enough.” The family looked around and then the lights came on. They saw a dark spirit feeding on the baby.
The family was called The peeker family. Suddenly They Shaun the light released the little baby. ‘What an horrible ghost”. Said Mr Peeker. AT the end they moved into another house made out of waffles!
This is my story. My story is about a family and a ghost this is an made up story. Our LI: was to Write narrative paragraphs using topic sentences Deatails,concluding sentence.
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